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Hickory dickory dock
Big dick licked my cock
I skull fucked him twice
And banged him thrice.
Hickory dickory dock..

Hickory dickory dong
You're a fucking mong

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Originally Posted by thesparten

Hickory dickory dock
Big dick licked my cock
I skull fucked him twice
And banged him thrice.
Hickory dickory dock..

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Good start, but the cadence is off on some lines. And it needs punctuation. Try this revision, with a redneck twang added for style.

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Hickory, dickory, dock.
Big dick done lick my cock.
Skull fucked him twice,
And banged him thrice.
Hickory, dickory, dock.

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P.S. Big dick, your version has too few lines. Refer to this page to review the motivating original:

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hickory_Dickory_Dock

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Originally Posted by MumblesBadly

Good start, but the cadence is off on some lines. And it needs punctuation. Try this revision, with a redneck twang added for style.

Quote:

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Hickory, dickory, dock.
Big dick done lick my cock.
Skull fucked him twice,
And banged him thrice.
Hickory, dickory, dock.

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P.S. Big dick, your version has too few lines. Refer to this page to review the motivating original:

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hickory_Dickory_Dock

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Much better..

I hate not being able to wright but big dick gives good head, so fuck it.

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Gonna need Wiz the fuck in here pronto.