Well Goatlive, your video is certainly verbose!
Again, just focus on one thing as you seem to be all over the place. And at nearly 3 hours… yikes! Gotta cut that down bro!!
The YT Audience has a collective attention span of a Labrador. Meaning you need be short, sweet and get to the point fast! I get it you went live and there’s no way to condense a live chat. But if you answer quickly and move on, it will cut out dead air and wasted time.
And I can appreciate you having pictures of your child on the live stream image, but juxtaposing that with a picture of cleavage sends a very wrong message to potential viewers. I’m not accusing you of anything, but cancel culture has made it so you can’t even say He or She without them jumping out of their skins! Either remove the little girl’s photo or the boobs photo. It might get you the WRONG kind of attention!
Other than that, you spoke well and held your own. So kudos for that, just try to get to the point and refrain from rambling. If you want some tips, watch Spencer Cornelia’s video on Chrissy and try to pick up on his edits, cuts and transitions as a way to get the message across in less time!
https://youtu.be/GBspkFipfdg